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One day. the Goddess was out walking, and she met a man. The man was playing a guitar. The Goddess stood there, amazed, for the sounds that were emitting from the guitar were the most beautiful she had ever heard. Far more beautiful than the sound that had played in the beginning, and she had not thought that possible.
Then the man began to sing, and his voice was more beautiful than the guitar and the guitar was more beautiful than the sound that played in the beginning, so you can possibly try to imagine just how beautiful it was...
The Goddess stood by his shoulder and listened to him. She was awestruck, for years she had tried to find somebody who broke all the rules of beauty, who reshaped them into something new. And here he was...
She didn't want to interrupt his song with her words so she said nothing, but he felt her prescence and drew his song to a close.
"Yes?" he said, for he knew not that she was his creator.
"I just heard you...the music...I - it was so wonderful." she stammered, all her glory fading away to nothing and only the Goddess as a girl standing before him.
His face broke into a broad smile, "Did you like it?" he asked.
"Yes...no...I loved it."
The man grinned again. "Shall I play you some more?"
"Yes, yes, please do!"
"I'm Tom." he said.
"I'm Lily."
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:iconfool-on-the-hill:
Fool-On-The-Hill Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2004
awww the beginning of a great new relationship?
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placetobe Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2004
Well, it would be nice, wouldn't it? I think I might exand some more on that lovely little relationship...I was imagining where it could head next as I was walking home...Fills the dark half hour...
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Fool-On-The-Hill Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2004
lol yeah, the goddess and tom need head somewhere with it
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placetobe Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2004
I'll write more! I'll write more! Sheesh...why does everybody keep bugging me about it???

*silence*

*Voices in head "Write more...Write more, we say!"*

Ah! That's where all the noises are coming from!!!!
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:iconfool-on-the-hill:
Fool-On-The-Hill Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2004
lol the mystery is solved!!!!
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Februar Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004   Artisan Crafter
I want to know more!!
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placetobe Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004
*taps nose* It's a secret! :p
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Februar Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004   Artisan Crafter
Yah....but don't forget who we ARE......
:)
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placetobe Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004
Lol, yes...I'll write some more later :)
*does secret hand sign*
I'll also tell you more about the secret hand sign!!! ;)
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Februar Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2004   Artisan Crafter
I'm looking forward to that!!
:)
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