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Now
I feel strongly for you
But I fear you are deluded
And I fear that my paranoia will push you away.

Yes, he warned me
I went to him for advice and he told me
But darling, I just wanted to be open
I know that my fear is an enemy of ours.

It pecks away at me
It has flown from one open wound to another
First it drank its fill of the blood dripping
From my fear of the enemy of the ones before.

Then it clawed its way through my fear
Of my past not yet over with
And it hacked at my neuroses
And it chewed at my self esteem.

My dear, I like you so much
And I'm so scared I cannot be enough.
©2006-2009 ~placetobe
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:iconseongjun:
Lovely poem it brings tears to my eyes
:iconoriginallordofwar:
It is beautiful, intense, deep. But do you think someone being deluded is a bad thing. Maybe a martini will hell..p ease your pain.

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Some times I have no place to exist, Some times I have no place to go. I just want a place to be.
:iconplacetobe:
maybe.... =]
Thank you dear!

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:iconfree-bird:
very graphic, but that only serves to portray a great depth of emotion, and it really works so well :)

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take a whiff on me take a whiff on me
everybody take a whiff on me
i said a hey
hey
baby take a whiff on me
:iconplacetobe:
Ahh. This one is kinda unfinished and rushed at the end.

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:iconfree-bird:
i still think it's great :)

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take a whiff on me take a whiff on me
everybody take a whiff on me
i said a hey
hey
baby take a whiff on me
:icontigereyelover:
Good stuff, though unusually dark for you. I like it.

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All matter is simply energy condensed to a slow vibration and we are, therefore, one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively. We create our own worlds, yet are shaped by our connections to one another, from our love to our hate. We are one.

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