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War by ~placetobe:iconplacetobe:

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I am a slave to myself
We are always fighting
She wants the love of an older man
And I just want to be content with him.

She wants to be wild and passionate
Live a life filled with sex and excitement
I want to sleep and cuddle him
And have our secrets caught in dreams.

She is angry and violent
And she cannot express herself.
I am too restrained to speak at times
I'm too humble in others' shadows.

She wants everything to be sudden
Fireworks that never run out of gunpowder
I want to take things slow and walk and talk
And reflect on things to come.

She wants to have everything she sees
That one, and that one, and this one
I want only him and he holds my eyes
Locked tightly upon him like arms around his body.

She misses the ones that came before
And doubts she loves the one that is now.
I put myself into him and swear only
To him I shall be loyal.

She wants nothing to last
Everything could be so throwaway and nothing needs to hurt.
I want it to last until I let out my final breath
And I clutch him goodbye and I am gone.

She is fighting with herself
I am fighting with myself
She is fighting with me
I am fighting with her.
©2006-2009 ~placetobe
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bleh

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:iconoriginallordofwar:
~OriginalLordOfWar Feb 5, 2006, 8:22:15 AM
Wow, that is very powerful. I am sure he loves you back. I hope you figure out what you want. Just remember once you want something, sometimes you have to fight to get it. Never just roll over and die. You might take a few in the vest, but never give up. I definitely like the introspective style.

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For the people that love you, Kiss them gently on the forehead. For the people that hate you, allow Louisville the pleasure.
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~placetobe Feb 5, 2006, 9:11:24 AM
Hmm, I don't know. Thanks for the comment and the fave! =]
And I would never ever roll over and die. I'm too strong for that. I'll fight on and on until the end. =P

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Click Me
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~OriginalLordOfWar Feb 5, 2006, 11:26:22 AM
That's what I like to Hear, Confusion and Clear thought. Very reassuring.

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Some times I have no place to exist, Some times I have no place to go. I just want a place to be.
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~placetobe Feb 5, 2006, 11:28:00 AM
:hug:
You just want a place to be eh? *winks*

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Click Me
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~OriginalLordOfWar Feb 5, 2006, 11:31:19 AM
Damn straight, I hoped you'ld catch that. *Sly smile*

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Some times I have no place to exist, Some times I have no place to go. I just want a place to be.
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~OriginalLordOfWar Feb 5, 2006, 11:51:35 AM
Hey, you started it.

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Some times I have no place to exist, Some times I have no place to go. I just want a place to be.
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~Free-Bird Feb 5, 2006, 12:52:29 PM
i agree, very powerful, very clever and introspective :)

you're strong enough to have what you want Cey, just keep at it ;)

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take a whiff on me take a whiff on me
everybody take a whiff on me
i said a hey
hey
baby take a whiff on me
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